Very good. But, unless I miss my guess, you should say something about your family, too.
非常好,但是我除非我想错了,不然你应该谈谈你的家庭。
when they would be capable of providing information about traffic jams and suggesting alternative routes, when they would be used in hospitals to help doctors to diagnose illnesses, when they would relieve office workers and accountants of dull, repetitiv
计算机可以使办公室人员和会计免除那些枯燥、重复的劳动。